What do you think of my song?

Hi,I did the following:

What do you think of my song?I wrote this song. It's called "Just Breathe" and it inspires people to calm down and take a breath. Tell me what you think! This is just the Chorus:

CHORUS: One day I'll be there for you--
And one day we'll make them believe--
That the trouble we face is just the time we waste-
C'mon don't give up now- It's not too late-
We can get through this to-gether if we breathe-just breathe.

Plz tell me what ya think!:) Thnx!

-Derek Soul
I like it, it's very meaningful, and i bet everyone can relate to it:)

-Toni Hannon
Love it gurllliiieeeee aha keep writing songs, and trust me, you'll be famous one day! Love ya sis!
~Toni :)

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